Original paragraph
Jupiter shines at magnitude -2.1 or -2.2 near the southwestern corner of Aries. It rises about 2 hours before the sun on June 1st, but 4hours early on June 30th. But the best time to observe it telescopically is when it'[s higher, in morning twilight.
My paraphrase
JUpiter has a magnitude of -2.1 or -2.2. You can see it 2hours before sunrise on June 1st and 4 hours before on June 30th. But, the best time to see it is twilight.
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Good, but you are missing some details. In your paraphrase you didn't mention where you could see Jupiter.
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